Kia Orana, This week we have been learning to use dialogue and show don’t tell.
I’ve done some of my writing here! Hope you like it!
“This car is really fun!” yelled Harry.
“Well, we need to find the train and get on it!” replied Ron.
“We’re really breaking time here, aren’t we?” asked Ron.
“Yeah, for sure, this shouldn’t be allowed!” Harry said.
As Ron and Harry were flying around in the car, they saw a little bit of landscape!
“Oh! Some mountains! Let’s go, maybe we can find the train here!”
Yeah, I’m ready! “I’m getting a hard feeling there if I’m going to be honest with you!”
“Oh there’s a train track over there!” pointed out Harry.
Ron flew out straight, “Oh we’re on the track! So now we just need to find the train!”
The car went as fast as a Sports car, but they heard something.
Smoke started dripping, “Oh no! Do you hear that?” said Ron.
“AHHHHHHHH!” The tire’s of the car flipped and flopped around as the train was behind them.
“Get us OUT, what are you doing?!” cried Harry.
The car flew out and they looked at the back.
“What are you doing?” hissed Harry.
“That’s not my fault, I didn’t see the train!” replied Ron.
Have you been learning how to use dialogue in your writing?
BYE!